First, you'll need to download the PDF draft from Octavo and open the file in Adobe Reader (download for free here).
Next, to set the file up for review in a two-page spread: select the display options at the bottom right corner, and click ‘Two Page View’, ‘Show Cover Page’, and "Zoom to page level”, this is going set the PDF up to properly mimic the layout of the future printed book.
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